One more month closer to spring, and it’s the shortest one of the year! 😎
To celebrate, I’m sharing a poem from a few years ago, together with a couple of suitable tunes.
TWENTY-EIGHT DAYS
A Poem in Envelope Quattrain style
Audio Version:
Twenty-eight days…
Fight or flight?
Dark or light?
Eyes ablaze!
Twenty-eight days…
She had no clue
The day she’d rue
Her wanton ways!
Twenty-eight days…
It started well
Now it’s hell!
And she obeys…
Twenty-eight days…
He roped her in
With charming grin
And flowing praise
Twenty-eight days…
His manner changed
Became deranged!
Overt displays!
Twenty-eight days…
No way out!
Strong self-doubt
Thoughts in haze…
Twenty-eight days…
Time to act!
Resolve intact
No delays!
Twenty-eight days…
The time is nigh!
Live or die!
It’s not a phase…
Twenty-eight days…
She made a plan
To kill the man
Her fear allays…
Twenty-eight days…
She lay in wait
He came home late
Steady gaze!
Twenty-eight days…
She raised the knife
To end his life!
Could only graze…
Twenty-eight days…
It came to this
How could she miss?
And now she pays!
Twenty-eight days…
He grabbed the hilt
Devoid of guilt
But oh, so crazed!
Twenty-eight days
From start to end
One can’t contend
When all decays…
Twenty-eight days
From start to end
Twenty-eight days!
© Debbie. D & The Doglady’s Den 2019-2025
Images courtesy of: Flickr / Pexels / Pixabay / Pixnio / PxHere
International Domestic Violence Resource Guide ►
Originally published Feb. 18, 2019
for the #WEPFF writing challenge:
Musical Muse
For more excellent music, visit the 4M crew.
Click on the image (opens in a new tab):
MORE FROM THE BLOG:
LATEST FROM INSTAGRAM
Follow THE DOGLADY’S DEN on WordPress.com
Discover more from The Doglady's Den
Subscribe to get the latest posts sent to your email.
Dog Mom and (retired) Canine Innkeeper in suburban Toronto, Canada, known as The Doglady. Former corporate workaholic. Writer, photographer, digital creator. Animal lover, music fanatic, inveterate traveller. Eternal hippie/rockchick. History, literature and cinema buff. Hockey and soccer fan. Dedicated night owl. German/Canadian binational, multilingual. Let me entertain you!
12 thoughts on “A LOT CAN HAPPEN IN TWENTY-EIGHT DAYS! 😲 #Poetry ✍️#4M 🎶”
Scary but a poignant and brilliant poem. Domestic abuse is so horrible.
In this instance a knife was the wrong weapon!!!! LOL, needed a 44. 🙂
Love the poetry!!!!!
Hi Debbie – very clever and ‘a delight’ to read … just sad too … well done – Hilary
We do live in violent world, although it was much violent let say 100 years ago.
Coffee is on and stay safe
There’s a thin line between love and hate. A very thin line and in this instant it was Twenty-eight days. Very well done.
Have a fabulous day and week, Debbie. ♥
great poem! have a wonderful day
The dark side of life, Debbie! It’s an unfortunate situation for those who can’t get out of a bad relationship, especially an abusive one. Well-written expressions of emotional sadness.
Definitely dark, especially for those who can’t escape. Thanks for checking out the poem, Eugenia. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
Debbie,
She should’ve followed through when she had the chance. It’s hard to understand how anyone can stay in an abusive relationship. How sad! Great job on the poem!
Hi Cathy, yes, she certainly messed that up. Sadly, for some, leaving is easier said than done. Thankfully, there are good resources available to help victims of abuse. Thanks for checking out the poem! 🙂
Ouch! That was dark…
Yes, that was the idea. 🙂 Thanks for reading my poem.