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A little off-the-cuff rhyme for today:

don't invade my personal space
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I slap your hand

Get outta my face

Do not invade

My personal space

Coming back

Breath on my ear

Smelling foul

Get outta here


Starting to sway

Drunken slob

Just go away

Passed out now

And kept at bay

My personal space

Is safe for today.

drunk man invading my personal space
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Don’t you just hate when that happens?


Looking forward to your comments!

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Debbie D.

Canine Innkeeper in suburban Toronto, Canada, known as “The Doglady”. Writer/website owner, photographer, animal lover, music fanatic, inveterate traveller. History, literature and cinema buff. Eternal “hippie/rockchick”. Binational, German/Canadian and multilingual. Looking for the next adventure!

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28 thoughts on “PERSONAL SPACE

  1. Hi Debbie,

    As always, you come up with such lovely poems and of course posts too! This one is apt where our personal space is concerned – and the image too- saying that no one can invade it, and the power to stop them too, lies in our hands.

    Thanks for sharing. Have a nice weekend 🙂

  2. Ooohhh you are getting WAY too clever with your rhyming ditties. I can see you doing this rap-style with your dogs in the background doing doggy-style doo wap. ( but don’t hurt yourself with those rap gyrations). LOL LOL. So clever! Give us more ( in your OWN space, of course). 🙂

    1. Same here, Corina. Even worse are those ones that are always touching your arm, etc. 😛 Glad you enjoyed the poem, Just a little bit of amusement. 🙂

    1. 😀 Good plan, Myke! I do like my personal space. Those “close talker” or “touchy/feely” types really bother me. Thanks for dropping by.

    1. 😀 This was just for amusement, but I seriously don’t like it when people stand too close, or even worse, when they’re all “touchy/feely”. Loved ones excepted, that is.

    1. Neither can I Corinne! 🙂 Even worse when they’re inebriated. LOL Glad you enjoyed this little bit of amusement. Thanks for visiting and have a good weekend.