Often called “micro” or “nano” fiction, 55 fiction is the art of creating a complete short story in exactly 55 words, no more, no less. Not an essay, not a poem, not a bunch of random thoughts, no musings. Just a potent piece of pure fiction, composed in 55 words.
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22 thoughts on “I HEAR YOU KNOCKING. IS THIS A SECOND CHANCE FOR LOVE? #55Fiction #MicroFiction #4M #MusicMonday”
Well, would I take him back? If there was crying involved, I just might. This was a good 55 word story. I knew some of the songs on your Apology playlist and, of the ones I didn’t know, Kelly Clarkson was my favorite but Akon’s song was right up there, too – pretty heavy lyrics in spots and I spent a few minutes learning about him as an artist.
When I was young..er…I would have opened the door and listened but now? He’ll no! I think I’d put on the song, ” Don’t cry for me Argentina.” If he still would not leave, I would tell to buzz off and if does not leave, I will call the cops.
I enjoyed most of the music. A couple were a bit to hard Metallica rock for me but i did like it overall.
Gee, that’s a tough question. I’m not sure what I would do but I think yeah, I’d probably would take someone back if I felt the apology was sincere and I felt totally comfortable that it wouldn’t happen again. Nothing is for certain. Life is about chances and when someone screws up, then it’s to give those deserving a second chance. Excellent playlist! Thanks for joining the party, Debbie. Have a boogietastic week!
Cathy, that’s an excellent answer. But could you be totally comfortable it wouldn’t happen again? Hmm… Glad you enjoyed the playlist. Thanks for hosting the party! 🙂
Honestly probably not but I think hope would allow me to go forward. Not to say there might be periods of wondering, even doubt that I did the right thing. That’s human nature but as they say time heals old wounds and with it trust is rebuilt. I wish in circumstance like this everything was instantaneous back to normal, even better than before but it doesn’t and that’s probably good so both people can work through the process rekindling, strengthening their bond. I’m so thankful that I’ve never been put in such a situation.
I only ever had one offer to take someone back who had left me, and I declined it because the initial break-up had been so unexpected and upsetting. I still liked her, but couldn’t put myself through that again.
Best wishes, Pete.
My answer to your question, ”yes I would” and I do not dig the second chance principle at all. I think this 77 x 7 which means forgive and understand endlessly is the only way. I do not refer to any religions but who does not make mistakes everyday the stupid ones too.. violence is the different thing no one should tolerate that, but if the person who does it really changes and has evidence for this, sought help to handle it etc.. we all should support this kind of person. I do not believe in punishment, compassion is better. But the one who makes mistakes should show he/she really tries though stumbles.. Your playlist is very good. Good 55 words post Debbie and have a good new week!!
Jean, you show great compassion and understanding. I agree, everyone makes mistakes and what you say carries a lot of weight. This is not a question that can be answered flippantly. Thank you! 🙂
55 words exactly. That does not seem easy but you did it, and it was a good story. Whether to take someone back who left you for someone else. I don’t think that is a good idea.
Thanks, Thomas. It took a while, but I figured it out, eventually. 🙂 As for taking someone back, it may not be a great idea, but I guess it depends on other factors we don’t know about here.
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22 thoughts on “I HEAR YOU KNOCKING. IS THIS A SECOND CHANCE FOR LOVE? #55Fiction #MicroFiction #4M #MusicMonday”
Well, would I take him back? If there was crying involved, I just might. This was a good 55 word story. I knew some of the songs on your Apology playlist and, of the ones I didn’t know, Kelly Clarkson was my favorite but Akon’s song was right up there, too – pretty heavy lyrics in spots and I spent a few minutes learning about him as an artist.
Hard to resist crying, isn’t it? 😀 Akon is an interesting artist. Thanks for coming by, Alana!
great short story Debbie, not sure I would be quite so forgiving lol… but those puppy dog eyes can get to you… ♥
Thank you, Sally. Glad you enjoyed the story! 🙂
When I was young..er…I would have opened the door and listened but now? He’ll no! I think I’d put on the song, ” Don’t cry for me Argentina.” If he still would not leave, I would tell to buzz off and if does not leave, I will call the cops.
I enjoyed most of the music. A couple were a bit to hard Metallica rock for me but i did like it overall.
Haha! Good one, Birgit. 😀 Glad you enjoyed most of the songs!
Gee, that’s a tough question. I’m not sure what I would do but I think yeah, I’d probably would take someone back if I felt the apology was sincere and I felt totally comfortable that it wouldn’t happen again. Nothing is for certain. Life is about chances and when someone screws up, then it’s to give those deserving a second chance. Excellent playlist! Thanks for joining the party, Debbie. Have a boogietastic week!
Cathy, that’s an excellent answer. But could you be totally comfortable it wouldn’t happen again? Hmm… Glad you enjoyed the playlist. Thanks for hosting the party! 🙂
Honestly probably not but I think hope would allow me to go forward. Not to say there might be periods of wondering, even doubt that I did the right thing. That’s human nature but as they say time heals old wounds and with it trust is rebuilt. I wish in circumstance like this everything was instantaneous back to normal, even better than before but it doesn’t and that’s probably good so both people can work through the process rekindling, strengthening their bond. I’m so thankful that I’ve never been put in such a situation.
Great 55 word story. In answer to your question, most probably no. But I’d be curious to hear them out. 🙂
Thanks, Deb! 🙂 Those are tougher than you’d think. Yes, I’m with you about hearing them out, at least. Hard to forgive something like that, though.
I done the go back and it never worked out. If you break up then there was a reason. Revisit that reason and just move on.
Have a fabulous day and week, Debbie. Hugs. ♥
That makes perfect sense, Sandee. 🙂 Thanks for coming by.
Nice songs and I would really have to do some serious sole searching on that one. Usually when I am done, I am done with someone.
Thanks for your answer, Patrick. Glad you enjoyed the songs too. 🙂
I only ever had one offer to take someone back who had left me, and I declined it because the initial break-up had been so unexpected and upsetting. I still liked her, but couldn’t put myself through that again.
Best wishes, Pete.
Yes, once bitten, twice shy, as the saying goes. Thanks for coming by, Pete!
My answer to your question, ”yes I would” and I do not dig the second chance principle at all. I think this 77 x 7 which means forgive and understand endlessly is the only way. I do not refer to any religions but who does not make mistakes everyday the stupid ones too.. violence is the different thing no one should tolerate that, but if the person who does it really changes and has evidence for this, sought help to handle it etc.. we all should support this kind of person. I do not believe in punishment, compassion is better. But the one who makes mistakes should show he/she really tries though stumbles.. Your playlist is very good. Good 55 words post Debbie and have a good new week!!
Jean, you show great compassion and understanding. I agree, everyone makes mistakes and what you say carries a lot of weight. This is not a question that can be answered flippantly. Thank you! 🙂
55 words exactly. That does not seem easy but you did it, and it was a good story. Whether to take someone back who left you for someone else. I don’t think that is a good idea.
Thanks, Thomas. It took a while, but I figured it out, eventually. 🙂 As for taking someone back, it may not be a great idea, but I guess it depends on other factors we don’t know about here.
You are right. You never know.