#8Sunday WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS; JUL. 14/13

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8 Sentence Sunday Blog Hop

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Changing things up this week.

Poetry’s not really my strong suit, but I get the urge, every once in awhile.

Here’s a short poem I wrote a few months ago:

MAGIC MAN

She was grinning like a Cheshire cat

Feeling gorgeous and wicked

and wishing that

It would never end

***

This was madness, of course, and too decadent

Lived only for the next interlude

Her feelings, so eloquent

It was bound to end

***

Flames that burn too brightly are not easy to sustain

The Magic Man was losing interest

and she was in so much pain

It was going to end

***

She tried a few last-ditch desperation ploys

 This only served to make things worse

And now, there would be no more joys

This was the end

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Every woman should have a Magic Man in her life, at least once and for however briefly!

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Debbie

The “Doglady”. Canine Innkeeper in suburban Toronto, Canada. Writer/blogger, animal lover, music fanatic, inveterate traveller. History, literature & cinema buff. Eternal hippie/rockchick. Bi-national, German/Canadian and multilingual. Loves all things Italian, especially hubby. ♥ Married since 1973!

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34 Responses to #8Sunday WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS; JUL. 14/13

  1. Deb E
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    Hey Debbie,
    I suck at poetry – writing and interpreting – but I like that this one isn’t lost in overly convoluted language! Mmmm, Magic Men, don’t we love them, and wish they loved us back…
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    • It’s not my strong suit either, but, still fun to write. :-) My poems are all pretty simplistic and straightforward. The magic is the euphoria in the beginning. Yes, too bad it doesn’t last. :-P Thanks for visiting Deb. :-)
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  2. I’m really bad at poetry, writing or commenting on it but I like the way the end is progressing.
    Linda Hamonou recently posted…Hump Day Hook 2: Demon SoulMy Profile

  3. I quite know what you mean about women (and even men) needing that experience at least once in their lifetime! It does help you grow tremendously! Lovely poem!!
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  4. Poetry is so subjective…what folks like/don’t like. I liked this. Seems like lots of ladies could relate, and the imagery through your words was delightful!

    • Nice to meet you, MIllie. :-) Glad you enjoyed this one. I know what you mean about poetry. Never thought I was that good at it, but it is fun to write. Thanks for visiting.
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  5. Poetry is not really my thing Debbie but you did good. I enjoyed that one, thanks for sharing.

    ~Adrienne
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  6. Do we need the passion or the pain, at least once in a lifetime? Great poem!
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  7. Very moving, Debbie. Thank you. Talent lies in many directions, doesn’t it? Poetry is special.
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  8. Great poem! I think pretty much everyone can related to the feeling.

  9. Oh, I hope you write more poetry, this is so lovely. Thanks for sharing it!
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  10. Cool!! You can write poetry. I also like the row of dalmations with wagging tails.

    • I’m thrilled you like it Elaine, because I never thought I was any good at it. LOL Thank you! :-D
      Those are the cutest little Dalmatians, aren’t they? The Dalmatian is my personal mascot, as a tribute to our late, great, Tasha whom I have proclaimed to be the “World’s Greatest Dalmatian”. ♥ Thanks for visiting and have a good week. :-)
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  11. Well, you certainly have a talent for writing poetry! That was wonderful, Debbie! Kudos to you! :)
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  12. I love poetry, can’t write it…today’s was very evocative and made me think about a certain bad boy in my past LOL – well done!
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  13. Oh great poem! Lots of emotion, very thought-provoking. I like poems that leave interpretation up to the reader.

    As far as my Magic Man, Rod Stewart explains it best:
    You’re just a dream and as real as you seem
    I ain’t that lucky

    ;-)
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    • It really makes my day that you like the poem Marcia, because I’ve never thought I was any good at writing poetry. It sure is fun to do though! :-) Great Rod Stewart quote, from “Some Guys Have All the Luck”. Some guy will be lucky enough to meet you, I’m sure. Thanks for visiting.
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  14. I like it. Susan’s right about the last stanza. It has a desperation that is captivating.
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  15. Nicely done poem (though I’m not a poet) – the last line progression is truly captivating and sad. Interesting #8
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  16. Better than I could ever do!!
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